full and tired and holding on
the edge is tipping, the tide is strong
im falling faster than i can see
flying farther than i know to be
and thats ok, cause here we go
you and me up high, down low
swinging through the dreamtime stars
driving round in broke down cars
sleeping deep through daylight heat
dancing hard to that all night beat
and in the still i see your smile
even though its been a while
street smart punk or rock star fame
i'll always love you just the same















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"Whats freedom and magic without love?" ~Massive Attack
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"Whats freedom and magic without love?" ~Massive Attack
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So many feelings...but nothing to say...everything is written...it's better this way...
*RawEm0tion
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"Whats freedom and magic without love?" ~Massive Attack
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yuujyou wa kokoro no chuugi
~ The hearts loyalty is friendship.
i like to imagine what the poems would sound/feel like spoken out loud, by me and/or another person it helps me get the feel for where i might want to put punctuation, line breaks and capitals, (sometimes i actually read em out loud per a friends suggestion) i imagine/feel this one as one big run on sentence ending in a
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"Whats freedom and magic without love?" ~Massive Attack
just elaborate the imagery and it would be great
quick bursts of movie catch phrases will not get you far
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I am a critic.
"If you have time to be depressed, why not grace us with your talents?"
*RawEm0tion
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